Crit Feedback...

General Comments:

Re stationary:

Nice designs but use own photography.

I would take images of own hair, primary photographs.

The hairdressers letterhead is pixelated.

Pixelated photograph on hairdresser letterhead.

(The pieces I showed in crit were mock-ups and I wouldn't actually use pixelated images!!)

Research into identity and professions/tools/equipment.

Hows does stationary designs fir together?

Feedback:

1. Professions are all quite similar?

2. Music teacher?

3. Something to link they together?

Questions:

Q1.) Any suggestions on which other professions I could design for?

A.) Gardener, Cleaner, Electrician, Accountant, Lawyer?

A.) Chef, plumber.

General Comments:

Re old wives' tale:

Very nicely executed packaging - concept is nice with the choice of items.

Great packaging designs that communicate message to appropriate audience.

Start to consider the contexualisation of the packaging.

Great, clear illustrations for old wives' tale brief.

Professionally executed packaging.

Well thought out and developed ideas.

Wide range of appropriate visual imagery that has been put to good use.

incredibly developed and works very well.

Consider designing a little something to bring all the designs together.POS stands and promotion.

Feedback:

1. Apply type to tissue illustrations

2. How are they all being tied together?

3. Box? With tissue paper or stuffing.

General Comments:

Re Viewpoints:

Designs are appropriate to rural and urban.

Speak to Catheryn Chialton for production tips - transfers etc

Consider primary research.

Feedback:

1. More rubbings!

2. Primary research? Press leaves

3. Cath - photo expose onto plates

4. Urbanising natural environment.